Continued commentary written for draugdur

This has been great fun to do, and it made me think deeper about my stories, made me realise my deficiencies in some areas and basically was quite a learning experience. I'm so glad that draugdur had this in her wishlist. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!

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Part One

( This story was actually salvaged at the last minute from another one. Find out why and how I did it. Also, a discussion on the history of slavery )

For draugdur, who wanted a commentary of one of my fics - basically notes on the whole writing process like a commentary track on a DVD. After looking at my list of Hornblower fics, I settled on this one. It was recent enough so that I actually remember what I did, and it had quite an strange conceptual history I thought would be interesting to share with ( Read more... )